Friday, October 21, 2011
Home is like...
Home is like sipping on hot chai tea on a crisp fall morning. That feeling of comfort you receive from it overpowers the anxiety of the day ahead. Home is like falling asleep and taking the best nap ever knowing all your duties are accomplished for the day. It's that feeling when you close your eyes on the swing and you think you're going to lift off. Home is like love, it's an inspiration, and one of the most important aspects of our lives.
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I love the first sentence. It really captures your readers' attentions and brings them to that moment. In reading, I can smell the tea and the leaves and the entire atmosphere. Try to expand on that metaphor and keep the imagery going.
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