This crayon response has definitely showed what is more important to the writer. Every time she writes a main point, she pressed on the crayon harder. She was definitely influenced by the crayon. She talks about how if the writer develops this flexibility, they would also be able to develop different personalities easier. As she says this, she also developed a pattern with her crayon color; Pink, blue, green, orange. Which is kind of contradictory to her point.
However, her writing was very good. She took a hard concept to grasp and made it simple and did not have any "babies" she needed to kill. She got her point across with a minimum amount of fuss and made it easy to look at as well.
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